For my father's effort
My father makes me feel the best.
His creativity flies like million planes
In the sky. He could do anything
for me, as to have a lovely day.
He treats me like a king although
I don't have any kingdom.
He does too much for me, but
more than what is neccesary.
That's why I reward him
with a big hug and a famous
phrase, "I love you father".
Visual image: blue
Methaphor: red
Comparison: orange
Sensory/ auditory: pink
Visual image: blue
Methaphor: red
Comparison: orange
Sensory/ auditory: pink
Great work Lauti. Your poem is very well built and it´s very expressive. Notice that what you´ve marked in blue is also a simile.
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