miércoles, 2 de septiembre de 2015

Writing a family poem

For my father's effort


My father makes me feel the best.
His creativity flies like million planes
In the sky. He could do anything 
for me, as to have a lovely day.

He treats me like a king although
I don't have any kingdom.
He does too much for me, but
more than what is neccesary.

That's why I reward him
with a big hug and a famous
 phrase,  "I love you father".


Visual image: blue
Methaphor: red
Comparison: orange
Sensory/ auditory: pink

1 comentario:

  1. Great work Lauti. Your poem is very well built and it´s very expressive. Notice that what you´ve marked in blue is also a simile.
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